53% Revenue Boost with The Right Messaging Strategy for eCom

How Messaging Changes Can Unlock Hidden Revenue

Many businesses struggle with low-converting paid traffic, assuming they need better ads. Often, the real issue lies in the messaging. This was the case for BreoBox, a subscription box brand, that saw a 53% lift in revenue per visitor after we refined their messaging.

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The Challenge: Visitors Weren’t Convinced

BreoBox’s homepage clearly explained the product, but it didn’t motivate people to buy. Our research found that visitors hesitated due to concerns about:

  1. Product quality – Would they receive cheap, forgettable items?
  2. Relevance – Would the products be useful and exciting?

Since their traffic came from paid social ads, visitors weren’t actively looking for a subscription box—they needed stronger motivation to convert.

The Fix: Making the Offer Irresistible

Instead of simply describing the box, we reshaped the messaging to:

Highlight discovery and excitement: “The coolest products you never knew you needed.”
Showcase product quality with engaging visuals.
Use customer insights to address concerns upfront.

This subtle shift helped low-intent traffic feel confident about purchasing.

The Lesson: The Right Messaging Drives Conversions

BreoBox’s success wasn’t about changing their product or increasing ad spend—it was about positioning their offer in a way that resonated with their audience. Messaging CRO isn’t just about what you say; it’s about how you make people feel about your offer.


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